What if it's properly buttoned up instead? Man but that jacket sure balloons up now, kinda kills the silhouette we had going with his guy. Let's kill the glasses too since the character's partly written already and the writers would have to go back and edit some bits of text about his eyes. I think a white jacket would work well as a canvas for the lightshow. He's in a room with a projector that's blasting trippy LSD coloured light all over the place. And man not so sure about that sweater either. It'd much more likely be some kind of an old reflector vest he wore as part of the crew. Maybe his old jacket? I'm not too keen on breaking his silhouette with more clothes though so I'm thinking we try out an arm band. Maybe a ribbon in his hair? Some kind of memorabilia from the cleanup crew days.

Needs some accessorizing to bring him out of that random dude place, to add some character there. Maybe let's try a lazy ponytail instead?Īlright getting closer. It's not the hair that's the Bird's Nest. It's a good start! The slim silhouette, natural almost invisible way of dress is great. Add a rigid leather fanny pack as a coin purse for his clerking obligations.Ĭomments come back from the writers. You can see this guy having a smoke on the little lawn in front of his 16 story public housing apartment home. Immediately I'm reminded of a few people I know, these hippie types who've gotten older and started dressing down from their regular outlandish gear. Though he grew up on the coast and runs a pawnshop by the water, he doesn't like boats.įirst draft. He was part of the cleanup crew after the People's Pile disaster. His arms, legs, and torso all seem too long, and his hands are too large – expressive hands with long fingers, but nevertheless ugly.

Roy, white male, about 50, tall and gaunt, pawnbroker and drug addict (though the latter is not immediately obvious).

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